ShadowDweller

I noticed (like nyx) there were a few places where I think your space bar was being mean. A spell/grammar check could help with that. Also: Pleaded to go back, ...

At first Xanthus was not sure what woke him, but it angered him. Who dared to make enough noise to wake him from his sleep?! He sat up wondering what ...

It sounds very interesting and I can't wait to see how it plays out! It left me with so many questions! It is like the work of a Devil, running ...

I like the characters, their eyes especially, they’re very expressive. Something I notice though is that none of them have any distinguishing marks (birthmarks, scars, ect...). If I saw these ...

I was there When you won your first gymnastics medal I cheered The loudest I was there When you had your first heartbreak I gave you My shoulder to cry ...