ShadowChic

Heya, Shadow here. Have you read The Da Vinci Code, Angels and Demons and The Lost Symbol by Dan Brown? There really good. What about Eragon? You either like it ...

I deleted this aswell. sorry x

OMG!! This is great! So emotional. I love it! Kafkaescence got most the points I was going to say. But this is amazing. One mistake you did make (and don't ...

Hellooo!! Im not very good with poetry so i can't be very specific and technical, but I don't want to let a fellow YWSer diwn when their desprate for reviews. ...

Hi ShadowKnight, I'm ShadowChic!! LOL!! Welcome to YWS! You'll love it here and everyone you meet will say that, because it's true!! Your story ideas sound brilliant. I don't really ...

Wow, well firstly, welcome to YWS!! This is a great idea, but I feel you should have put it in the short stories if the whole of your story is ...

Thank you for the reviews. I'm glad you like it. I'm major glad that you like the names and I hope you like the ones for the other character's too!! ...

Sorry I deleted this. Don't ask why. x

Hello AWJO224! Welcom to YWS!! This sounds like an amazing plot. Maybe a little bit like Eragon? I love that book so it's good. I hope you post up soon! ...

Hey, This chapter is great, if a little short. Is this a whole chapter or just part of one?? Your description is lovely. I like how you incorporate smells into ...

Heya EAThomas, Shadow here again!! This second piece of work is similar to the first. It's still too long. Try splitting it up into three parts instead of two. It ...

Hey Curtis! Welcome to YWS! (Even if this welcome is a few days late. Hehe) Lets start this then: 1)I'm ShadowChic, most call me Shadow! 2)I'm 15, almost 16 (YAY) ...

Hello, Shadow here, about to review you!! To start with, I love the way you write. You put description in without losing the storyline. Perfect!! However, as always, there are ...

Hey EAThomas! (Cool name by the way) At first glance all I can say is wow! This is one great idea you've got going! There are the few issues though. ...

OMG! Most books really. I hate directors and producers that kill the whole story of an amazing book! Here's my mini list of The Films I Wanted To Cry About ...