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  • Other Poetry Re: Four Haikus

    On the middle line of 4 it seemed a bit like the 'here' was just there because it needed to fit with the pattern. For a first haiku these are ...

    May 3, 2006
  • Other Poetry Re: Free Fall

    It's really good. The only thing I'm not sure about it the 2nd line. It doesn't seem to flow as well. Other than that i love the feelings and the ...

    May 3, 2006


What really knocks me out is a book that, when you're all done reading it, you wish the author that wrote it was a terrific friend of yours and you could call him up on the phone whenever you felt like it. That doesn't happen much, though.
— J.D. Salinger, The Catcher in the Rye