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Re: Beware the land of waking dreams.
Wow. From the first line, i loved that poem. I can't think of anything but positive feedback for that poem, although I am no poet :p. At first I was ...
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: The Beginning of the Cursed Prisoner
A couple of things. In your first sentence you say Today was Friday, one of the luckiest days of my life. Perhaps you should say; Today was Friday, soon to ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: Cadet Challenge Chapter Two: A battle Within Darkness
Well, I haven't read the first chapter ( I know, lazy of me :p), but the story seems interesting so far. There are grammatical errors everywhere and I don't have ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: The Casualties of War
Thank you both for your Feedback. I love it when I get praise =). Although if someone could see anything to improve on, that would be great as well :p. ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: The Pink Unicorn Parade!
This is Gary =). I made him for my ITS Assignment. He is an angry unicorn.
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: Frozen and Flowing Time
Can you really find a fault with flowing water stopped in time? Doubtful. I love them both. Although I don't pretend to be a photography master :p. However, perhaps it ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: The Casualties of War
This is my first story i have written, I hope you enjoy it =). Sorry about the length, i realize it isn't a short story, but neither is it a ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Hey everyone. I'm new (Obviously). I'm ShadeZ, or Alex =). I'm into writing, reading and computers and I'm from Queensland, Australia.
Nov 5, 2011