Shade

I like the idea of the hand, looking at the border maybe you wanted to give the impression of somebody who is in a hurry anyway, like running away hurriedly ...

coolio, this is really good :) I love anime I draw allot myself but I don't have a scanner and I draw for me to see and not for anybody ...

This is a good idea yeah, but why on a site called- 'the young writers society,' ?

I think this is very good, not sure though, it would probably benefit you if you took a better picture, again I like the her hair. :)