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Ooh, I'm so glad you kept going with this, I loved the first part! right, I think you're better at writing description than writing about the people themselves, what they ...

wow, I really like this poem, this imagery and description is amazing though I'm not sure what it was about I don't think it was supposed to be about anything ...

I don't like butterscotch but everyone else I know does, my fav genre is fantasy usually but it changes alot, i will go to the chat room :)

I like the idea of the hand, looking at the border maybe you wanted to give the impression of somebody who is in a hurry anyway, like running away hurriedly ...

yeah, I get what your saying, I know it needs allot of work, I also originally wrote this in Gaelic, it works allot better and rhymes in Gaelic so yeah, ...

banned for having a sheep on your head and thinking it's a cool accessory

coolio, this is really good :) I love anime I draw allot myself but I don't have a scanner and I draw for me to see and not for anybody ...

This is a good idea yeah, but why on a site called- 'the young writers society,' ?

I think this is very good, not sure though, it would probably benefit you if you took a better picture, again I like the her hair. :)

Ooh, I just can't wait to see what happens!! This is great work! Being not so great at grammar 'English is only my second language,' I can't find any grammatical ...

Hiya Wow, I really really like this! So much seems to be explained in such a short paragraph, excellent description, I really did feel like I was there. Very well ...

I really like this! What's freaky is that I have a friends called Megan Bell who also has weird dreams, only she knows when she's dreaming and when she's awake. ...

Hiya I honestly cannot understand why so many people are telling you this poem needs allot more work ect. I really feel this woman's pain and sadness, you portrayed her ...

I really like this, good poem Falling into a dark abyss, Ugly thoughts run through your mind. ugly? I know it fits in well with the acrostic but I'm not ...

oh good I'm glad you understand me, apparently Scots Gaelic is very similar to Breton and Irish Gaelic but I've never seen any similarities myself :) Did you know the ...