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Hey hew, Lots of good things going on--I like the action scene in the beginning and I'm interested in the main character. I also like that we see her meet ...

Hey Justagirl, I totally agree with Amelia in that this article is well written and easy to follow and inviting while firm. I really enjoyed your humor, too--it was snarky ...

Hello Stori, So far, I'm intrigued by the character. I want to know if he's actually a human or--if it's the case that he is just an intelligent species of ...

Hello Quibbons Quill, First of all, it's great that you started with action, because that draws the reader in. This was also a nice way to begin characterizing Jack. We ...

Um. How much do you love a thorough critique? P.S. I only do thorough critiques for pieces that I like, so don't take that the wrong way. >.> I've actually ...