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Hey guys--thanks for the reviews! To confetti: You're right about the name, and if this had been a longer excerpt, I probably would have included it, but I was hoping ...

I know this isn't much to go on, but if you could just give me your impression of things unsaid , that would be great. In return, I would of ...

Hey hew, Lots of good things going on--I like the action scene in the beginning and I'm interested in the main character. I also like that we see her meet ...

Hey Justagirl, I totally agree with Amelia in that this article is well written and easy to follow and inviting while firm. I really enjoyed your humor, too--it was snarky ...

Hello Stori, So far, I'm intrigued by the character. I want to know if he's actually a human or--if it's the case that he is just an intelligent species of ...

Hello Quibbons Quill, First of all, it's great that you started with action, because that draws the reader in. This was also a nice way to begin characterizing Jack. We ...

Death Note is pretty awesome (I could never think of all those plot twists and the insanely-well-though-out, diabolical plans). And I've seen part of The Twelve Kingdoms, but never got ...

I used some pretty… technical words, so don’t be afraid to ask for definitions if you need them. The main issues I saw were clutter and redundancy and some commas, ...

Oscar Wilde is actually not my #1 favorite, but he got me into reading more classic literature, and I enjoyed DG. My best friend plays clarinet. ^^ I typically end ...

Wow! Talk about coincidences. Oboe players are kind of rare. I tried a little bit of piano, because I like using my fingers more, but that didn't last long. And ...

So since you like music, you must sing or play an intrument, right? I don't actually love music, but I'm in the school band and take private lessons and etc. ...

Um. How much do you love a thorough critique? P.S. I only do thorough critiques for pieces that I like, so don't take that the wrong way. >.> I've actually ...

@ Incadescence: Oh! I read your poem on the first page and liked it. :o Just so everyone knows, I have no problem with harsh critiques . Really. So feel ...

Wow, warm welcome. Thanks! @Jenna: Para-chan is okay with me. As for what I like to write, I don't really have a specific genre. I'm working on a romance right ...

Well, it is somewhat late and my mood is a bit feyish at the moment, but I don't think I'll change much between now and tomorrow. So maybe you'll still ...