SergeantRosie

Hello! Thanks for the review! I didn't realize how much time I put into setting up Jean and Hura's past relationship. This is probably because, spoiler alert, the story changes ...

Thank you very much for the useful information! I agree with you that my descriptions were not very good. I suppose I just wrote something to help me remember what ...

Ahaha! It wasn't my intent to make it seem that way with Weaver at the end, but it certainly does look like that now that you've pointed it out! As ...

Thank you Caterpickle! And yeah, for the project i was writing this story for it had to be 4-6 pages double spaced and this was nine! Haha, It definitely doesn't ...

Thought I fixed that! Haha...oh well. Thanks for pointing that out! :)

Thank you so much! I love having names in another language that actually mean something to the story. Mainly in this story I liked "Dusa" it wasn't truly a name ...

Those are all great ideas! Thank you very much! I completely agree with the first three paragraphs sounding too much like a research paper. I wasn't sure how to fix ...

It definitely helped, I'll be editing it in the near future. Thank you for the advice! As for continuing the story, I'm not sure how I'd put that one together. ...

Thank you so much! I've always wondered what I'd do if I were in this type of situation. There's always at least two sides you can take to every problem. ...