SerenityAmour

The more I think, the more it remains clear that I'd go through anything with you. I would suggest you change this line to something more like this: "The more ...

Amazing! I had to start off with that, cause it's true. You wrote an amazing lyric. I loved reading it, and I bet you loved writing it. :) How old ...

This was a really, really strong article! Definitely understandable. This was pretty concise, but managed to say all that it need ed to in the process. I wish I had ...

I think this was fantastic, totally relatable. Just one little thing, and I'm pretty sure it's just me, and that's that it seems to just...end. Not a super strong conclusion ...