SerenityAmour

Dear HostofHorus, Wooooow! What a thought-provoking piece of work. There is so much that I want to commend you on: First off, I just want to tell you that I ...

To TheTraveler, I enjoyed your poem very much, and I left a review for ya! I'd like for someone to check out this article.

Hey Guys, SerenityAmour here. This is an article I submitted to an online ezine that I write for, http://www.honeysthatwrite.com, a few months back. I would love to get some feedback ...

The more I think, the more it remains clear that I'd go through anything with you. I would suggest you change this line to something more like this: "The more ...

Amazing! I had to start off with that, cause it's true. You wrote an amazing lyric. I loved reading it, and I bet you loved writing it. :) How old ...

Hi there, I really enjoyed this poem. It was wonderfully creative. I think you gave it the perfect length, because when you really read to hear the speaker's voice, you ...

[ Here's a love poem I stumbled across the other day that I wrote a couple of years back. It's essentially still the same despite a few small changes in ...

They say that people change, Like seasons, like the tide. But there’s nothing that compares to you, Behind those careless eyes. Change is such a fickle thing, And you’re the ...

Wow. This was a nice poem. First, I must mention that you have a very ensnaring title. It drew me to your poem. Although simple diction, the emotions and the ...

This was a really, really strong article! Definitely understandable. This was pretty concise, but managed to say all that it need ed to in the process. I wish I had ...

I think this was fantastic, totally relatable. Just one little thing, and I'm pretty sure it's just me, and that's that it seems to just...end. Not a super strong conclusion ...

Hey guys. This is my first submission to YWS beyond a blog. I recently submitted this article to an online magazine. I am open to all reviews and critiques. I ...

hey there :) Welcome! You are going to love it here; its a great place to share your stories. I'm also somewhat new here and looking for someone to give ...

Welcome to Young Writers Society Serenity! A wonderful place where you will be able to post your poetry, novels, and short stories. Others will be able to review your work ...

Hey, First, I want to tell you that I hope I don't do too much repeating of what fellow members have already said, and secondly, this is my first review, ...