Serenity612

Oh wow, good point on that one. I suppose I didn't think about that.

Yeah. You two give some good advice (thanks by the way!). No matter how I've tried to write the narrator explaining it it just turns into a huge info dump. ...

I'm a starting out writer and well I never have written a fantasy novel. And I'm having trouble working with age spans. I know I'm making it harder for myself ...