Sercous02

Thank your Sylverdawn and Sokool, I'm glad that you liked it. ^^ I'll probably post another story up here sometime soon, but I'm going to look over it first, see ...

Thank you. I'll edit a few things and see if I can make it better. But I'm happy to get the advice, it helps me figure out what I need ...

Ahh okay. I'll remember that next time when I decide--or chose--which story I want to submit next. ^^ Thanks for the advice

Alright--thanks for the advice--I wasn't sure about it right away because it looked all jumbled at first--but I'll take it out of the pre and pm it to you ^^

Thanks GriffinKeeper. I probably should have read it over again before I posted it XD. Next time I'll make sure to do that so I won't have so many errors--but ...