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I liked it. The beginning really hooked me into what the rest of it's about. But you might want to remember: FANBOYS For And Nor But Or Yet So It's ...

Ahhh! This made me so sad! I myself am I a ravid Twilight fangirl and was pratically devastated when Edward left. I think you've really captured what Bella was feeling ...

As some people might have told you already, you kind of put your diolouge into one whole paragraph. It will be easier to read if you seprate it. But this ...

This is really good! I've always tried writing poems that rhymed, but they never turn out that well. :) What I liked best about your poem is that the words ...