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  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: The secret boy (Chapter 1)

    Hey, Seph here. I'll try to make this review worthwhile :D So, first comment. The whole plot is fine, it's just you have a few grammatical slips here and there. ...

    Apr 20, 2012


Oh, Brightlord Tumul! How unexpected it is to see you standing there! I didn't mean to insult your stupidity. Really, it's quite spectacular and worthy of much praise.
— Wit (The Way of Kings by Brandon Sanderson)