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Senri

  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Nevermind

    Hi OnCeUpOnAtIm3Xo, my name is Senri and I'm a new member here. I read your story and liked it, so I decided to give it a crit if you don't ...

    Jun 4, 2008
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Melancholy

    Hi Squishy. I'm Senri, and I'm pretty new. I decided that your story will be the first on crit. You should most definitly follow Saint RazorBlades Critique, it will be ...

    Jun 3, 2008


The thing about plummeting downhill at fifty miles an hour on a snack platter - if you realize it's a bad idea when you're halfway down, it's too late.
— Rick Riordan, The Son of Neptune