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Thank you Ripple Gylf for this review. I am very happy that you liked this, and I will definitely edit the ending so that it's a little more consistent. Thanks ...

Oh and to your question about the word twindom, at first I thought I was completely making the word up, but I looked it up, and it seems to have ...

Thank you so much! All of this was some great advice. To your question about the harshness of the grading, I already sent her the essay, but she only comment ...

I'm glad my review helped. And here's my biggest tip. Go around reading others' works, and review those. Trust me, you'll be helping them and they'll help you. But you ...