Selin

Hey KnightlyAngel09, it's Selin here! First, I should mention that this poem is so far to be cheesy. The rhythm is perfect. Especially in this line; "And without you, I ...

Hello ozasatya! It's Selin. Before I begin to criticise your poem, I'd like to say welcome to YWS! I hope you will like this atmosphere of sharing lots of precious ...

Hey, everyone! Thank you all, you gave me very useful tips and I'm going to work on this poem. I can say that I tried to tell you how this ...

Hey, June; it's Selin here! I still am not sure why did I choose this piece of your work to review, but I can say that when I see something ...

A little girl, Standing curious and quiet. Looks nervous but, Confident and patient. Holds her bag tight, Hugs its cold, wet surface. Wondering why, Does she always need to cry? ...

Hello KeepASecret! It's Selin here! First of all I'd like to say, welcome to YWS!!:) I hope you'll enjoy here. About your poem... When I saw the name, "Before I ...

Hey, Flower, it's Selin here! Your choice about theme is absolutely great. Time and how fast it passes. I liked your repetitions, "tick tock"s, as they ease to catch the ...

Hey, RJ, it's Selin here! I think you have a very exciting story in your poem. All those "I hear the whistling."s are to make that story more interesting somehow; ...

Hello, Love2act4ever, it's Selin here! I want to say that I found your poem a very good way of expressing the situation you're in. And it seems everbody agrees with ...

Hi, it's Selin here! First, I need to say that I really liked your poem. Especially the theme and the way you express it. Your descriptions were quite tasteful for ...

Anger, hurt, disappointment All those words, I'm scared to say out loud Sometimes as a huge wave, knock at my door Say, where have you been that long? No answers, ...

Hey, everyone! Thanks for reviewing my work, it really will help me a lot. I think I've written this in a very confusing way, maybe it is because this is ...

Hello, MySunshine! A very cool name:) So, you know the rules, let's meet then! I am one of the new users too, so I'm not sure I can help you ...

Hello, Liz! And, all right, you know the rules! So, hey; tell us a bit more about yourself:) Do you like languages or history? I'm really new here too, so ...

Hello, Elle! I'm a new one too but here, everyone seems friendly and that's really encouraging! So, senior year of high school, right? Oh, it's a little bit complicated all ...