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SeeMySoul27

  • Randomosity Archive Re: Left Or Right? Let The Best Hand Win!

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    Jul 6, 2014
  • Other Poetry Re: Sun and Sky

    Hey, I'm Soul, I'll start off by saying overall I liked this poem and must say my favorite part of the poem has to be the first stanza. I loved ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: This Angel is About to Sin

    It is in fact a very short. Inspired by Rick Springfield 'I get excited' The lock clicks into place; Determination fills your gaze. I get excited. I can tell you've ...

    Jul 15, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Inquiry

    'Ello there, To start off I'd like to say that overall I liked the poem. Going into a bit of detail as to why, I'd have to admit I had ...

    Jul 15, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Shoulder The Veil

    'ello, I'm Soul. To start off I'd like to say that, overall, I really liked the poem. You have really good imagery through out the entire poem. Not to little, ...

    Jul 14, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Her Name is Peace

    'ello there. I'd like to start off by saying that you have great imagery here. It really helped me to see what you were saying. I also really liked the ...

    Jul 14, 2011
  • Other Re: Suffocating

    I used to post my, well I'm not even sure what they were, on another site. I decided to go back and re-read what I had written before and, needless ...

    Jun 2, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: My poems....

    Hey, soul here, on review day; Giving you a review, obviously . I noticed you said you didn't really write poetry, but I must say you're pretty good at it. ...

    May 29, 2011
  • General Articles Re: The gay guy in the bar

    First off I'd like to say this was really blunt. The bluntness, I find, really added to it. I mean when stereotypical thoughts go through our heads they are exactly ...

    May 29, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Don't Stop

    **Old Version** When I see your name in the top five, I can’t help but smile for I know that’s where it belongs. Quickly I click upon the title you’ve ...

    May 24, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Papa

    Sometimes all I can think about are those last few days with you. Sitting down the hallway just staring at my shoes. Trying my hardest to pretend I can't hear ...

    Mar 23, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: It's Missing You

    This heartache is just long past due My mind goes insane with every thought of you It's missing you that makes me like this Makes my every emotion an evil ...

    Jan 26, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Another perspective

    Hi Kat, Ellie and Lily, *waves* My name's Cait. Known as nothing else other than my username as of the moment. It's nice to meet you all. Thanks for the ...

    Jan 25, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Another perspective

    Hello, I'm new. Not that you haven't already guessed as much seeing as we are on the 'welcoming mat' and all. Speaking of which, I heard this is the place ...

    Jan 24, 2011


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