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Thunder pounded overhead as Jasmine trenched through the rain, umbrella looming over her head like a small black cloud. The bitter wind went straight through her thin jacket, sending violent ...

This piece was really unique, and I've never thought of music and dancing that way, being a dancer myself. It definently let me see dancing in a different point of ...

I sat in my room, gazing around the loneliness of it. Simple black draperys lined the windows and the walls were plain and unimportant. I reached over and grabbed a ...

I really liked it and I could definently relate to it. My only problems is at points the lines didn't flow together. The rythym of the poem was off at ...

wow talk about a depressing piece. i really liked it though and it was very well written. there were a couple of times where the flow of the poem was ...

I really liked the pretense behind the story, and i was drawn in. The ideas dont really flow together in the beginning when you start talking about the therapy stuff. ...

thank you all for the comments! i appreciate the help ^^

Sometimes black, And sometimes white. But always time To make it right. You twist my heart Into a million pieces, And catch my breath Until it ceases And yet somehow, ...

Name: Chrystiallis (Chrys) Koriokami Age (13-18): 17 Appearance: Medium height, with long, auburn hair that turns pure white in moments of anger and when she activates her powers. She has ...