SecretWolf

LittleRedRidingHood007: Me thinks the lady doth protest too much. LittlePiggy: Pigs don't exist.

Hey, I loved your poem! It's powerful. On the first stanza, I thought it was hard to downshift from talking about roses, to "some" people who noticed that the roses ...

Your story is quite intriguing. I agree with previous reviewers however, a prologue would probably be a good idea to introduce a little of what's going on. You might start ...

Hey hey, Thanks for the welcome! It's nice to meet everyone. Since several of you asked, one of my big hobbies is short-film making. I also have done theatre a ...

Besides reading and writing, what other hobbies or interests do you have?

This is an awesome idea. It sounds like a script for a screen-play though, am I right? A bit technologically difficult for theatre, I'm thinking. It would make an amazing ...

Your story is fascinating. Your perspective is interesting, and your character's curiousity about this woman is intriguing. It makes the reader curious about her too. I was a little disappointed ...

Nice Piece. Robert, Fred, and Cormac are solid characters here. Tommy's bounces a little. At first he seems like a stoic and solid, deep and forboding character. Which is good, ...

Hey, you've done well with your prologue. Your writing is very descriptive and visual. I'm wondering about the names of your characters though. You write of a grand battle, with ...

Hi, This site seem pretty cool, so I thought I'd try it out. Not entirely sure how it works yet, but I'm hoping I'll learn as I go. Tips, advice, ...