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Re: The Nighttime Sky.
Oh. My. Word. THIS IS POETRY. No need for scheme, no odd, forced rhymes or rhythms... it's purely emotion and one moment. It's so clear and beautiful; simple enough to ...
Oct 4, 2009 -
Re: Floating
Definitely agree that it could use some punctuation to give it more definition, but overall a fabulous piece of work! Strong story and clear setting. Great job!
Oct 4, 2009 -
Re: Darkness Unpolluted
Oh WOW! The depth here... the story... it's stunning! Great use of emotion and imagery. By far one of the most respectable pieces I've seen on this site.
Oct 4, 2009 -
Re: Momentary Distraction
PAVEMENT! Chaos – yellow lines running together madly blending creating an unending line of yellow running on and on and on until the black meets the canary and vision touches ...
Oct 4, 2009