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Re: Scary Part
Hi, first of all remember to capitalize names and the start of dialogue. Also, there were some misspellings and awkward sentences like, "When her teacher began explaining." go through and ...
Jul 1, 2012
Hi, first of all remember to capitalize names and the start of dialogue. Also, there were some misspellings and awkward sentences like, "When her teacher began explaining." go through and ...
Jul 1, 2012