ScottieRAWR

Very well done, I love the way you're showing that being ignored by the person you love can hurt more than having them insult you. Please write more

That was simply amazing. While yes it was very sad I loved the imagery and point of the poem. It's just such a shame that he broke your heart. Please ...

That certainly was one of the most random andfunny things I've ever read. Please keep posting.

I don't really understand how God could save you from a class. But haveing said that I'm pessimistic. It had good imagery though.

That was an incredible piece of writing. In my mind a couple of bits were questionable but considering they made the poem rhyme it works.

Who ever knew heart break could be so dark? And yet, some part of me still carries on. Once you made my heart sing, much as a lark. But now, ...

Is the world determined to wake monsters? They always seem to know which tune to play. All they’ve conquered, like Alexander. When mine wakes, the skin off their back’s, He’ll ...