ScottieRAWR

Thank you for the kind words. I didn't realise until I wrote it that I used ache twice... ^.^" The Saint, is a joke between friends. There are more to ...

Half angel, Half devil. My heart is yours. Somehow I doubt you will close the cage door. The path of love never keeps the same course. And yet again, the ...

Absolute win! It's nice to see a poem that isn't cliched. And it's a haiku! Just Win!

We were asked to write a short story with the title All alone in School. We were given an hour to Plan and write it. Please enjoy. When the deepest, ...

I don't think anyone really knows how to review a Haiku, other than counting the syllables and saying. "Yes, that is a haiku"

I like the way you've used the phrase "kill me slowly". Although I feel that the poem would perhaps be more at home being sung with a Nirvana-esque band playing ...

The Sakura fall, A tsunami of beauty. Only you compare. I haven't been writing for a long time, so I'm sorry in advance.

I have to agree with Jagged as well. I like the idea of the poem, and I'm sure it would be a great poem if, and I'm not meaning to ...

Damn you! You had to leave me on a cliff hanger. Please write more soon. I can't wait to see what's next. Good imagery. You should get this stuff published

Definitely an amazing piece of work. Some bits I was slightly lost but I'm easy to lose in stories. I liked the way you described Isabella. Nice stucture. All in ...

For me, this is the final parting gift. But I wish I could be here for you all. The shadows of my life, never to lift. The fear of the ...

Excellent. But still very sad. I love the way it's gone from serene to suddenly very dark.

Seriously, please. Use the poetic abilities for happier things. While yes the poetic imagery was powerful I'm sure you can write about something less sad than a lonely girl self ...

Now that was powerful poetry. You have serious talent Dora. But please write about something more happy next time.

Time's a destroyer, that's one certain thing, She blunted the blade's of great empires All feel her pull, mortals and their buildings. Lost the legends of all the great liars. ...