Scorpia

so you wrote this while you were drunk?? This all seems vagily familiar... where have I read this before... Hmmmm I don't drink. You might have seen it on fanfiction ...

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you took the time to read the entire thing (it's rather long, I wonder If i should have seperated it into three chapters?) ...

Thank you for pointing out those mistakes. I'll go and fix them. Lol, yes, maybe sparkled is not the right word to use. It makes it sound like a silly ...

There are seven books in the series. Stormbreaker, Point Blanc, Skelton Key, Eagle Strike, Scorpia, Ark Angel and Snakehead. There great. Lyrical, you should read the books, SO much better ...

Lol, No! How could you, i was more like, "Don't you DARE kill him Horowitz!" Everyone thought it was the end of the series, lol. I did as well, had ...

ROFL, great. You should post this on if you have not already. I like Meyer but I'm able to take aj oke, and this was funny! I loved the part ...

I liked it, good writing. I think I would explain what was happening in more detail. Maybe explain the sitouation more.