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Re: a question
Hey there!! Its been awhile but its ScarredSecrets, back for another review! I absolutely love this poem. The all lowercase text really brings the..aesthetic into play. As a big foodie, ...
Feb 3, 2020 -
Re: Sit with me
Hello there MulticoloredCyr! Here for a review! Overall: OH MY GOSHNESS! I can definitely, without a doubt, feel the emotion in this poem. I, too, write poems when I am ...
Mar 28, 2019 -
Re: I Hate You
Scarred here for a review! Alright, first things first! I definitely felt the emotion exploding from this poem. It seems like this poem was written from the heart about a ...
Jan 18, 2019 -
Re: Silence
‘Ello! Scarred here for a review! Overall Thoughts: I really enjoyed it! I could feel the emotion coming from the words. I also really enjoyed the form of the poem. ...
Jan 8, 2019 -
Re: For the days I crawl into my black hole sheets
Hello! Scar here! To start with, it’s just my opinion but the title seems oddly long. I also spot some coma issues with your prepositions. I know poetry has many ...
Jun 12, 2018 -
Re: long nights and longer mornings
Hello! I think a lot of people can relate to this piece. It really speaks of the inability to sleep. However, there are a few mistakes. I know poetry has ...
Mar 23, 2018 -
Re: An Ode to My Lonely Heart
Wow, that was...intense. I am familiar with the internal struggle you’re describing. I like the way you write it as if your heart was a person you’d talk with daily. ...
Mar 22, 2018 -
Re: Prologue (Lead Me Home)
First things first. Your descriptions are phenomenal! It really creates a movie-like imagery for your readers. Pure beauty! It would take my entire lifetime to write a piece like that. ...
Mar 22, 2018