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Re: Saving the Young Writers Society DT
I am so in! Nickname: Lette, Clicky Magic: Everything I touch spontaneously combusts. Side: Minion Fighter (GASP! Shcoker!)
May 3, 2010 -
Re: Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?
Hey Skins! I would like a review. It's a romantic short story. Link: Thanks so much! Lette
May 2, 2010 -
Re: The Princess and the Knight: A Fable
Hey Elinor! I really like this, though I do agree with Jabbs. I wouldn't mind if it was a little bit longer. Maybe you could develop the princess and knight's ...
May 2, 2010 -
Re: Mutts - Heart
Hey Gryphon, it's your partner in crime here to review. (You love my irony. You know you do.) I loved this so much. You explained the way an AI works ...
May 2, 2010 -
Re: Peanut Butter Banana Sandwiches
Inspired by Bad Moon Rising, an Everybody Loves Raymond episode. “Would you stop!” Amber glared at Derrick as he ate his peanut butter and banana sandwich. He stopped mid-chew, surprised ...
May 2, 2010 -
Re: Stain on the Sidewalk *Re-edited!!*
Hey Isha! I like it. A lot. It was extremely sad, but it was (as many have said before me) good. Great, even. Your style of writing easily carries me ...
May 2, 2010 -
Re: Only Hope
Hey Yuri! I believe that Skins pretty much covered all grammatical/ sentence structure issues, so I won't bother with that. Instead, I'll focus on the fun stuff! I love the ...
May 1, 2010 -
Re: Slipped
Welcome to YWS, KAH! If you need anything feel free to PM me. There were a few typos I spotted, but that aside it was a bit short. The biggest ...
May 1, 2010 -
Re: So Seductive
Hey Hiadel, This was definitely interesting, but I have to agree with Areida. The title threw me completely. That aside, I like what you were trying to do, but I ...
May 1, 2010 -
Re: Third Wheel (Another Twilight Parody) Pt.1
Lauren- Thanks for the for your advice and criticism. I will definitely keep it in mind as I work on part two and revise part one. ~Nicole
May 1, 2010 -
Re: Third Wheel (Another Twilight Parody) Pt.1
Author's Note: This parody is based on a fantasy, not actual events. Part 1: All that Sparkles I once knew a girl named Bella. She was shy, klutzy, and introverted. ...
May 1, 2010 -
Re: Sunset
Hey JD, it's your wacky friend, Nicole, here to review! (I just rhymed!) Normally I would harp on you for how short it was, but if it was any longer ...
May 1, 2010 -
Re: Second Chances
I really liked it. I felt it was realistic. The only thing I that bothered me was the main character seemed to lack quirks that made her stand out. For ...
Apr 28, 2010 -
Re: New writer - hence a noob.
Hello Rahrad! Unfortunately Stella took the cheese question, so I feel like I have nothing to ask you. *sigh* Let me know if you need anything and welcome to YWS! ...
Apr 26, 2010 -
Re: The "I'm Back" Thread
So, I disappeared for three months! I was a bit a newb to begin with, but I'm back! I would say I'm better than ever, but that's not exactly...true...
Apr 26, 2010
