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ScarletteRose

  • OOC Archive Re: Saving the Young Writers Society DT

    I am so in! Nickname: Lette, Clicky Magic: Everything I touch spontaneously combusts. Side: Minion Fighter (GASP! Shcoker!)

    May 3, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?

    Hey Skins! I would like a review. It's a romantic short story. Link: Thanks so much! Lette

    May 2, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Princess and the Knight: A Fable

    Hey Elinor! I really like this, though I do agree with Jabbs. I wouldn't mind if it was a little bit longer. Maybe you could develop the princess and knight's ...

    May 2, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Mutts - Heart

    Hey Gryphon, it's your partner in crime here to review. (You love my irony. You know you do.) I loved this so much. You explained the way an AI works ...

    May 2, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Peanut Butter Banana Sandwiches

    Inspired by Bad Moon Rising, an Everybody Loves Raymond episode. “Would you stop!” Amber glared at Derrick as he ate his peanut butter and banana sandwich. He stopped mid-chew, surprised ...

    May 2, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Stain on the Sidewalk *Re-edited!!*

    Hey Isha! I like it. A lot. It was extremely sad, but it was (as many have said before me) good. Great, even. Your style of writing easily carries me ...

    May 2, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Only Hope

    Hey Yuri! I believe that Skins pretty much covered all grammatical/ sentence structure issues, so I won't bother with that. Instead, I'll focus on the fun stuff! I love the ...

    May 1, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Slipped

    Welcome to YWS, KAH! If you need anything feel free to PM me. There were a few typos I spotted, but that aside it was a bit short. The biggest ...

    May 1, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: So Seductive

    Hey Hiadel, This was definitely interesting, but I have to agree with Areida. The title threw me completely. That aside, I like what you were trying to do, but I ...

    May 1, 2010
  • Fanfiction Novels Re: Third Wheel (Another Twilight Parody) Pt.1

    Lauren- Thanks for the for your advice and criticism. I will definitely keep it in mind as I work on part two and revise part one. ~Nicole

    May 1, 2010
  • Fanfiction Novels Re: Third Wheel (Another Twilight Parody) Pt.1

    Author's Note: This parody is based on a fantasy, not actual events. Part 1: All that Sparkles I once knew a girl named Bella. She was shy, klutzy, and introverted. ...

    May 1, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Sunset

    Hey JD, it's your wacky friend, Nicole, here to review! (I just rhymed!) Normally I would harp on you for how short it was, but if it was any longer ...

    May 1, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Second Chances

    I really liked it. I felt it was realistic. The only thing I that bothered me was the main character seemed to lack quirks that made her stand out. For ...

    Apr 28, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: New writer - hence a noob.

    Hello Rahrad! Unfortunately Stella took the cheese question, so I feel like I have nothing to ask you. *sigh* Let me know if you need anything and welcome to YWS! ...

    Apr 26, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: The "I'm Back" Thread

    So, I disappeared for three months! I was a bit a newb to begin with, but I'm back! I would say I'm better than ever, but that's not exactly...true...

    Apr 26, 2010


what are stories if not just vehicles for the pain of your own heart
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