ScarlettWinters

I really like this. It’s clear and to the point. Its not cryptic yet it still feels smooth and graceful like poetry should be. You really get the feel for ...

Within a child’s mind there lays a simple concept that the world before our eyes is no different then the world we keep behind them. The barrier which adulthood forms ...

So sorry about this, trouble with editing

so dark and so moving. I love this. My favorite thing about reading this lyric is the way i was so intrigued by the story and the characters that i ...

hi my name is scarlett winters and im a brand new member of young writers society. so far i have submitted a peice that i have been working on for ...

i enjoyed it. i think its a good way to start the story. however, i think that you need to introduce the reader to the main character a little better. ...

So incredibly lovely. i honestly fell in love with this poam it has such a beautiful message. the last stanza has got to be my favorite, i love the point ...

you are a really good writer. Your sentence structure is excellent and you have done a fine job of developing the story.although i did like the way your story was ...

I really like this story. you do a good job of writing as your character. Your writing is deliberate,just as your character would be after going through such a traumatic ...

This is lovely. You are a wonderful poet. to be more specific i love the way the poem flows it has an edge to it that really gives it a ...

Hi there, i know its a bit long but if you have the time please review. thanks, Scarlett Introduction Within a child’s mind there lays a simple concept that the ...