Scarecrow

Um, What? Seriously how am I supposed to review that? I'll I can remember is that you had a suicide bomber, a car on a children's show lost it's virginity, ...

Wonderful, I come back for a day and our internet bites the dust, well I'm back again :)

As tex said, and as in your fist chapter, you need to break this up. One long chapter is hard to read. On a good, well actually great note, your ...

Very nice, but you should break it up in paragraphs to make it more readable. A big slab of writing makes my eyes hurt. Also Viva La Vida is in ...

Hey chanters, hope you have a good time here. Don't forget to scroll up and look at the rules Rosey posted. Have fun! ScareCrow

Hey, hope you have fun. (Nate gets really upset when you eat his cookies, try to avoid their choc-chip goodness)

Lol Ex. you do it so fast

Scarecrow? If he only had a brain? Some might find that insulting, some might find it hilarious. I find it both :D

Now I don't do all those nitpicking reviews with all that nitpicking and such. First, I think you should describe her surroundings more, all I can gather is she's in ...

My (cyan) pen (that I do all my schoolwork with)- Ares My computer- Hermes My BlackBerry (given to me by my mom, since she got a new one)- Eris My ...

Not directly, but it's generally annoying when people raise topics from years ago. I'd say don't raise topics from more than a month ago unless you really, really want to. ...

Welcome, hope you have a good time here. Two rules; 1. Try and use proper grammer, this means limited chatspeak, as were trying to promote good writing/ 2. Try and ...

Muwhahahaha I'm back. Bow down before me! And I've been busy, unbeliveable amount of homework and stuff.

[quote=We're here to say HI to our newbies! Then lure them into a false sense of security before we throw them to the hounds. Aren't we awesome? :D[/quote] Amen to ...

Well, I like anything from Eragon to Matthew Reilly.