SazzaMulgazza

Thanks. I'm wondering what you found confusing though. Here's my simple explanation: Essentially it's about the fact that when we remember, even good memories, even though they are happy, we ...

Okay I probably should take more time over this but it's just got one BIG issue: FORCED RHYME!!! I would recommend in the future not basing your writing around what ...

Thanks for your feedback. I wasn't that fussed about the stanzas to behonest, I was thinking about thatwhen I wrote it up last night but I didn't reallly take the ...

(This is a poem I posted on another account. I wrote it a few years ago so I'm trying to remember it and might not recall it word for word. ...

I understand the idea in place here but you are not taking the time to mould it into a poem. It does not read as a poem. I also think ...

continued... It was so cold outside – mid December – so I wasn’t surprised. I’d got dressed in such a flurry I really wasn’t physically prepared. I was almost shocked ...

I have smoked weed before lol.

Hi thanks, I take your points on board and appreciate your review, although with "realizing" I think it's spelled with an "s" in the uk and with a "z" in ...

Thanks! Yeah I know not giving you loads to go on lol. Yeah you learn about Nathan later, quite soon actually in sort of a flashback scenario between the main ...

I see what you're trying to do, the problem is that it's been done a million times before which is why when you write a song like that you have ...

Ok... I have to admit I cringe a bit when I read this, I have to say it's a bit clunky with cliche - sorry to offend you, I hope ...

This is just the beginning of something I'm working on. I haven't properly committed to it yet but I do have an idea of where it is going in my ...