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  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: confusion

    Hi there! Dropping in for a quick review here... I usually love these kinda metaphoric poems, and this was no exception, but I do feel it's a bit of untapped ...

    Jul 30, 2017

  • Other » Romantic, Dramatic
    Re: Burning

    Hello there! First of all, as Nikayla said, I think this is better suited as a (really really) short story than 'other', especially as it has a beginning, middle, and ...

    Jul 30, 2017

  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, General
    Re: An Open Letter to My Body

    Hi there! I understand this is an old poem, but I decided to review it because it must be relatable for many, many people. At some point, everyone thinks their ...

    Jul 30, 2017

  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    Re: Silence Inevitable

    This is literally so so so relatable that I was thinking reviewing it would make no sense because I'd just ramble on about how perfect the content is buuuuut here ...

    Jul 27, 2017

  • Poetry » Literature, General
    Re: Drowning

    Hi EmPanda! Dropping in for a review here. This poem uses only simple words, but still deals with a dark, serious subject in a splendid manner. I especially like your ...

    Jul 27, 2017

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: Selfless

    Wow, this... this hurts. It's so real that it's actually scary... if you can write with this much genuineness, then it scares me what you might do, and please please ...

    Jul 26, 2017

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Pointless.

    My breath caught in my throat at some sentences and I don't even know why... This was so beautiful. I'm thoroughly confused tbh, I'm not exactly sure whether the author ...

    Jul 25, 2017

  • Poetry » Spiritual, General
    Re: Forever

    Beautiful poem. I read that you've edited it considerably after the original post, so I can't say anything about that, of course, but at least as far as this version ...

    Jul 25, 2017

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: we are artists of different kinds

    Lightsong, I have no words. (Well, I do, as I'm reviewing this, but anyways.) There are millions of poems written, published, and made public, all over the world. Most good ...

    Jul 25, 2017

  • Poetry » General, Realistic
    Re: Boredom

    Hi ElvenJedi! I must say, upon reading your title, I expected you would have written something completely unrelated to the actual feeling of being bored... (I'm not exactly sure why ...

    Jul 25, 2017

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative
    Re: drunk driver

    Hey there screamingsloth. I feel that the most brilliant thing about this poem is that you do not realize (at least, I didn't) until the last line that the narrator ...

    Jul 23, 2017

  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic
    Re: Never Be Alone Chapter 1 (LGBT)

    Hi Ella! First of all, though this really is too short to be a chapter, it already makes me want to know what happens next, which is one of the ...

    Jul 23, 2017


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