Sassafras

::enter Reise, stage right:: Hello, IronBird! First and foremost, welcome to YWS! I did some snooping on your page and saw you're related to our dear IronSpark so yay for ...

Hey, Burrow! Since I'm a bit late in this game, I'll try to be curt. My main problem here is your character development. I have no idea about any aspects ...

Hi, Kelpies. I usually don't review poetry so please bear with me. If you're trying to keep with being grammatically correct then you need a comma after the first line ...

Hi, TestSubjectX! I feel like some weird evil scientist calling you that. I see you've already received some grammar correction from Horrendous so I won't bother. But, still, nitpicks. The ...

Hey, Cto! Okay, I'll try not to be repetitive with my review because I'm sure others have commented on the same things. However, next time you post, go easy on ...

Hi! This is the last chapter you have uploaded. *sigh* "This is our stop , " she announced. Fixed a little dialogue error that you had there. Although he is ...

Hiya! Me again ^^ a burst of questions came forth. Oh, I don't think "burst" is the right word to use here. Maybe you could even say something like, "As ...

Hello, hello. Again we have that pacing problem that I noticed in the previous chapter. I know that there are a lot of characters here and that you're trying to ...

Hey, Peanut! Yay, fantasy! I have to say that this is a pleasant break from all of the realistic fiction that I've been reading today. The little creature got the ...

Hey, Niraco. Me again. Okay, nitpicks really quickly because we have things to discuss. The lines on the road passed me by so dizzingly quick In the original you used ...

Hello, Deanie! Okay let's get a few nitpicks out of the way before getting to the really important stuff. It was hard to see myself living without him, although that ...

Hi again, Kate! How could I, an eight year old, be defending the village with the men? I don't understand, you said he was nine in the last chapter. You ...

Hey, Kate! She wasn’t on her mat. She was sitting at the table with my father. We understand that she's not on her mat when we read that she's at ...

Hey, Kanome! I've finally got around to reviewing your story. It only took Review Day to whip me into shape. :P The sounds of dripping water , being trapped inside, ...

Hey, FlowerPower! A thick hand cuts through the light of the moon You change tenses here with "cuts". By the time my next appointment rolled by, This time lapse is ...