Saruka

Hi Grace! I see that each line does have a capital letter at the beginning. That was unintentional, as I wrote this in Microsoft Word and it capitalized each new ...

Okay, let me begin with I love this. I am sorry to not give you any constructive criticism but I thought it was that good. The comparison of totally different ...

Thanks for reviewing this, RoseTulipLily! Her name was originally supposed to be spelled 'Lea', so I must have, out of instinct (my friend's called Lia) spelled it differently. I must ...

Thanks for taking the time to review my work! I do understand that this can be kind of triggering, and it probably won't be this violent later. Just to begin ...

Hey Charlotte! Great writing. I was really into the story, already thinking about what might happen next. Unfortunately, I was a little disappointed when I found it ending. Thoughts were ...