Sapsan

Alright, first off I think this has a good mood too it the isolation comes across straightaway which i like. However, even as a short story I find it to ...

I really believe you should understand the emotional aspects of rape beyond fear before you write about it. The picture your painting seems empty, your rapist is painted only as ...

Okay, to start I would say, I'm not really sure what the monologue at the beginning is about. You talk of truth and peace, but it seems very jumbled and ...

I think the main problem I have with this is formatting. Perhaps this is a style I've somehow misinterpreted and is supposed to add something to the piece, but upon ...