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Re: Rushing from door to door...
Rushing from door to door, fear in my belly, passion in my chest, something indescribable slipping up my throat, parting my lips in puffs of fog. Their laughter reaches me ...
Feb 16, 2009 -
Re: Blood Vessel
Alright, first off I think this has a good mood too it the isolation comes across straightaway which i like. However, even as a short story I find it to ...
Feb 16, 2009 -
Re: Blood Vessel
Alright, first off I think this has a good mood too it the isolation comes across straightaway which i like. However, even as a short story I find it to ...
Feb 16, 2009 -
Re: currently untitled work in progress
I really believe you should understand the emotional aspects of rape beyond fear before you write about it. The picture your painting seems empty, your rapist is painted only as ...
Sep 14, 2008 -
Re: "Terrorists should not be afforded media coverage"
As far as terrorists fighting for a cause, yes they have a cause, but I'm sorry anyone that will kill innocent people that have never done anything to them in ...
Sep 12, 2008 -
Re: A Rapist's View of the World: Joss Whedon and Firefly
1. What do you think of the 'article'? --------------------------------------------------------------------- I think the women's concerns are real, but she's looking for evidence of their relevance in
Sep 12, 2008 -
Re: What Can Be Done To Improve Education?
Oooh I don't know, maybe try giving the young people control over it! You have no idea, or maybe you do, how much just having a choice makes you want ...
Sep 12, 2008 -
Re: Pull back the curtain...edited version . added more too
Okay, to start I would say, I'm not really sure what the monologue at the beginning is about. You talk of truth and peace, but it seems very jumbled and ...
Sep 6, 2008 -
Re: Cemetry
I think the main problem I have with this is formatting. Perhaps this is a style I've somehow misinterpreted and is supposed to add something to the piece, but upon ...
Sep 6, 2008 -
Re: Sapsan in a chatty mood!
XD God that's always such a hard question to answer. I think my favorites are ones that could be classics in about ten genres. Neil Gaiman's American Gods. China Mieville's ...
Sep 5, 2008 -
Re: Sapsan in a chatty mood!
Hello, my names sapsan, I'm a soon to be seventeen year old homeschooler with a crazy insatiable hunger for new info, experiences and opinions. I have a love affair with ...
Sep 5, 2008 -
Re: Does the media give teens a bad name?
I agree. Not all teens are irrisponsible, stupid people who like to get pregnant and post nude pictures of themselves online. I would like to point out just so as ...
Sep 5, 2008 -
Re: Should parents smack their children?
I simply think violence shouldn't be introduced into a child's life on any basis, especially if the person doing the hurting in the violent act is an authoritarian figure with ...
Sep 5, 2008 -
Re: "Terrorists should not be afforded media coverage"
Not seeing a terrorist attack on TV will do nothing to solve the problem. The fact is terrorism is here and all around the world, seeing it is a fact ...
Sep 5, 2008
