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Great work, Durriedog! Have you been taking a college art class or something? I like the shading of her skin, implying the pale tone but also revealing a well-done shadow ...

Thanks Lauren. And what you said is definitely true, unfortunately. Nowadays it's all cell phones, video games, and television for the younger generation. People spend less and less time reading ...

Thanks, Jasmine! I will work on what you told me, perhaps changing the title in the process. I didn't really like the last stanza either; it just sort of came ...

In that little burst little burst of color What is there to see? What else could be fuller? Look at it again Look inside the heart What could there be ...

I agree with Izzy. It's a very nice poem, but there are a few things I'd like to say. Not only is it hard to understand, but the grammar isn't ...

Hi FashionistState. I'm kind of new too, but here are some pointers: #1. DON'T USE CHAT TALK! Chat talk is things like "hi i luv 2 rit3 how bout u?". ...

I agree with TheNewHero. It hits me right in the heart to think of what happens in that poem/song. At first I thought the child's parents were going to divorce ...

I really like how you edited "The Harp" poem. It has the same peaceful feel as before, but even more serene and beautiful now. You used much better description and ...

I am standing, straight and tall. I am round, but not a ball. I am stiff, but not a wall. Who am I? Not a call. Brown, green, and pretty ...

Well, It's pretty good. I really like your ideas and creativity. I also like the flow of the poem. But, I really do not like all the "i"'s at the ...

Thanks! Well I was sort of trying to cover it up that I am nine and about to turn ten, but oh well. Anyway, my favorite books are the Lost ...

Hi everyone! I'm very new here and would like to know who you are. What do you guys like/do? I like to read, read, read. I also LOVE art of ...

It is very nice! I really like the way you use the non-rhyme and non-rythmic form very well. I also like the way you kept it nice and simple. However, ...