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Can I be the little sister of some main character who always noses around her brother/sister's business and eventually finds out what's going on? Also, have you got any ideas ...

Very touching. I like the topic you chose and the originality of the piece. I also like the repetition of some ideas, such as the summer rain and the poppies. ...

Hi! (see, I said hi :D ) Well, that's not so good about the grammar and spelling thing, because you're supposed to use correct grammar and spelling here. Although I ...

it's fun.

I don't really know how, but this is supposed to be a submission to Lauren's script contest. It's really short, but it's supposed to be kind of funny... "It's that ...

It's a nice start. A very real seeming setting of a tense family, making it emotional yet not overly so. I like your choice of title. “How have you been ...

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I COMPLETELY agree. I think I'm going to be sick.

right... Well, it is funny, though a bit far-fetched, if i do say so myself. You're a great script writer, though! So...I don't really get what happens at the end, ...

Don't even know what it is...

This is so very emotional, as the leaving of a friend. I go through that too, because my best friend moved away from me, and even though we still call ...

Yeah, I agree with everyone else. You wrote it when you were younger, and so now that you're older, It is even cuter. I don't really get some of it, ...

Yeah, you're right. I did put it there just to rhyme. I think I'll be rewriting the poem soon! :? Bluey

Ok, Colors, there's a lot of stuff that needs to be done with this. 1) Editing!!! Your spelling is not checked and there are not commas where there's supposed to ...

Wow! Is that actually your first submitted drawing? If it is, it's really great! I can't really distinguish how well the eyes are done, because I think the lines you ...