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Wow, I haven't read The Ugly Duckling for years! But I remember the story and this is a great poem describing it! But, since it tells a story, I wouldn't ...

* I'm really sorry everyone! I've been on a trip for the past month and I didn't have access to a computer!* Miriam After I could hear Krystal's soft, whispering ...

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Yes, we should start now, since there's only one spot left.

If I didn't know that you deliberately meant it, I would have screamed at you for using "my" at the beginning of each line. But, fortunately, you're safe. The thing ...

Well, I'm sorry, but if you meant it or not, the first thing I thought after I read this poem was not, "Aw, that's sad, it's so touching." No. My ...

Um, I think when we've got all the characters. I hate it when people start storybooks when all the characters don't even exist yet.

Sorry, I didn't read the whole thing, but the first paragraph is pretty good, so I figured I would just work from there. I've seen that book! :D This essay ...

Thank you :mrgreen: It's my first storybook.

Hey, I finally got an Avatar! :D I give that one a five for sure. I love cats and green!

Really? Free hugs? I like hugs. But they're always free. :D

Lily It all happened so fast I had no idea what had happened for a few seconds. Then I came back to the present just in time to see Sutton ...

I agree. I think that the first one needs a kind of mysterious air to it, like if there was an arch or something in the trees, covered by ivy, ...

We've been playing hide-and-seek. It just finished. We;re going to do something else now.

Lily I heard the conversation from the door, and gasped at the same time Sutton did. I gathered my breath. I wasn't the courageous type. I would say I was ...