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Hello! I'd say this is pretty good for not being a poetry person. I loved the story; it was a very creative idea. You did very well on rhyming and ...

Hi! Overall tone of voice: intense. Great expression of emotion! The theme is creative, though a little hard to understand. You used a whole lot of really great words, but ...

The land is falling apart, and Great Mother is calling you. There is only one choice, but You are afraid to make it. The land cannot be healed, And Great ...

Hi Tranquility! This is such a heartfelt poem that it left me dazed and blinking after I finished reading it. The emotion was expressed well, and it took almost no ...

Sounds fun! Profile: BlueRaspberry Name: Attra Good half or bad half?: Bad half Age(14-20): 14 appearance: tall and slim strong points: beautiful and physically strong, knows the ways of the ...

This is such a well-written poem, it almost made me cry. Mary really comes out as a character, developed so that it almost feels that I know her personally. Most ...

Hello there! I simply love the theme. Who but a most creative writer would find some time to write about that poor little protractor? Your subtle rhyming is really well ...

Hi! I like this so much - I think it's so much more creative to write songs than poems ( I take it this is a song). I love the ...

The girls are at a hotel, and the trouble characters have tracked them down. They might or might not escape. By the way, if you need a hint as to ...

Well, you know guys, I'm younger than 11 and I am more mature than my 12-year-old friends. At least, I USED to be. Being around them peoples is not good ...

yup. I am moving to Switzerland. Sure, gotta re-learn French. But no more fast-food, no more getting fat! Plus, there's good chocolate there. Hee hee. Hahaha. WHOOPEEEEEEEEEE! Chocolate is good ...

May I have one too? I have absolutely no idea when someone last posted on this, I only found it readin white shadow's blog. :) 35 questions, plese.

Alright guys, I'm just going to delete the last Trouble Character, because the spot has been open for a couple of months now, I believe, and no one has taken ...

I would say, "No. I'm not," slam the door in its face, bake a lemon meringue pie, throw it at the elephant out the window, and if it was still ...

Overall, a great metaphorical poem. Loved it. In a costume of white trimming and rippling fabric swaying, No flaws that I could see in this line. It is a wonderful ...