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8/10 Hahaha very funny! If I do say so myself, it's tons better than your last one! That one was boring.

Hello! I really enjoyed this poem. The flow was wonderful, and I could read it easily without going off a rhythm. As for the title, it's pretty good, except I ...

Hi! I absolutely loved this poem! I read it out loud and it flowed smoothly all the way through; there were hardly any blips. Anyways, the first half taught a ...

Hi! I think this was very creative and I loved it! The acrostic feature of it was extremely well-done; it did not seem forced at all. Well, I guess you ...

Hi! I agree on the stanza problem. In fact, this might not have been on purpose, but there are very opportune places to break it up after the longer lines. ...

Hi! This was a very good poem. The emotion was expressed well, and the length was just right for the content. However, all the rhyming was extremely forced, as in, ...

Hi! Sorry to nag, but I think it might have been a good idea to do a review first before you post your work! Anyways, I really loved the creative ...

Hey there! I'm Blue Raspberry but you can call me Lili, which is also not my real name but no one else needs to know that, do they? :wink: I ...

Hi! This is a very good start, especially if you're not a poetry person. It's creative in its themes and I liked it. First of all, though, the title could ...

Hi! I really liked the way you can express emotions in such a short poem without overdoing it. Unfortunately, I think it just didn't flow quite right. When I read ...

Hi! I agree completely on the way this came out, especially since you said you're not an expert either. The theme, the lighting ( my favorite part), and the background ...

Hi! This was a really good poem, and I think it is worth submitting to a contest - with a few tweaks. The flow went pretty well until the end, ...

Hi! This is very good - it gets its point across to the reader without too many questions or confusions, and it really makes one think deep. These are great ...

Maybe you could review my recent poem? It's only got one review so far, so if you want to, go to Lyric Poetry and find "Great Mother is Calling You". ...