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Winter Bloom Why are you here? I ask you, What is the purpose Of living in constant death? You are beautiful, But cold, And all around you You see life ...

Great! The story was really moving, but there are several things that could make it a whole lot better, I think. First of all, although your plotline was really well ...

Attra " What is it, Rraka? " I ask my companion. " Danger. Man. In. House. Door. There. " he responds, lifting a paw to indicate a drab brown door ...

This is so wonderful! I can hardly give you any advice, I'm sorry, but it is just really well written! I couldn't find any spelling, grammar, etc. mistakes to give ...

Hi! These are great! I really like the designs, and I'm glad you spent awhile on them, even if it was tedious. I agree that although you didn't choose to ...

Attra I don't like this. I don't like this at all. I have always lived where there are trees, and there are no trees here. In fact, there's no greenery ...

Awesome! May I be the girl child?

I know I haven't posted anything in forever but finally, here is the third chapter. Please give me a complete review; I do not want to be told only what's ...

I absolutely love this poem! Mostly, I see no larger mistakes, although there are lots of typos. The flow is really even, and although sometimes it doesn't work, the difference ...

I loved this! I have never read such a wonderful combination of legend, emotion, and great poetry before. looking like some kind of Grand Central Primeval the Li River beautiful ...

Ahhhhh! It's so sad...you're going to make me cry! It's so beautiful and depressing at the same time, my nose is truly running, and I don't have a cold either. ...

Hahaha! There, it totally made me laugh out loud (even spelled out)! Awesome flow, some not forced, perhaps unintentional rhyming, the likes. In other words, it was a good poem ...

Nice! I like it! First of all, the flow was really good, despite the differences in the lengths of lines. Instead of ruining the fluency, the variation just added to ...

“Rise and shine!” sang Gracie gently as she poured half a glass of ice-cold water, fresh from the brook around the back of the little blue house, directly over her ...

This is my first try at anything but poetry. I know it needs a whole lot of work but I can't figure out exactly what it needs. Feel free to ...