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Attra I smile as I throw the rock. I enjoy the sound it makes on his skull, and the little cry he lets out, and the thud of his head ...

Awesome! #1: (close up of tree) I love the angle on this one. Is that really the way the tree leans or is it just me...? the sense of depth ...

Attra Grrrrrrrr...... growls Rraka, and I snap my head around to see- a boy. And a girl. Staring at us like we're some sort of aliens from outer space. Annoyed, ...

Attra "Beautiful creature, Rraka," she said, looking at my friend. She studied me, curiously with a hint of fear in her eyes. I smiled again, this time showing my sharp ...

I liked this poem, but it was not my favorite. However, I think the main idea could turn out to be really beautiful, with a little work! I thought mainly ...

Alice: Opposed I sat there, listening to my ipod, for maybe half an hour. Nobody talked to me; I don't think anybody even noticed I was there. I was at ...

Great work! I'll start with the small things... I light a candle, it's fire illuminating It's should be its. monster who wreaks havoc on the outside. This doesn't sound right. ...

Attra I catch my breath. She's seen me. My eyes harden, as I get ready for battle. I crouch back into the shadows, ready to spring at the first slight ...

Name: Alice Age: 12 Gender: female Appearence: She has dark brown, medium length hair and stands at about 5'2". Her eyes are a deep turquoise blue. she is of normal ...

I'm really sorry I'm so late-can I still post my profile? I wasn't sure whether I was allowed to be the child of the Opposed yet...

Attra I began to worry. Siki was not back yet, and the dawn was not far away, I could tell. I couldn't stay hidden for long. Suddenly, Rraka nudged me ...

This was really good! Just one main thing, then there are lots of punctuation errors; I know you know that. I want to know exactly why you feel the way ...

Great! I liked it a lot! But now it's back to my specialty: Fluency, fluency, fluency. The first stanza is pretty good, but after that there are many instances where ...

8/10 because it's boring.

Is it supposed to be that way?