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Great job on this poem! I really liked it. Just a couple of minor typos: knowing their going to let you down - supposed to be "they're". mines going to ...

Awesome poem! I liked the ending the most; it really wrapped up well even though it was a short poem. Pisces, eyes winnowing across my skin as though each cell’s ...

Chapter 1-Sky in Autumn It was September when I first saw her. The day was chilly, and a bit windy, but the most memorable part were the clouds. They weren't ...

Ooh, I'll do the Pegasi Air Race too! Do I have to pick a different number?

yes. all my worries are gone. :D :D :D TUBM hates justin bieber.

Nice! I liked it, the topic, word choice, etc. I'll divide stuff into stanzas to make it easier. Ever so beautiful, isn't it? This fairy tale life you live? Even ...

Well, well, well...I have to say I liked this cover because it kind of went Boom! in front of my eyes and I could almost hear the colors of red ...

Good splatter poetry! We just did some of that in art, as a matter of fact...anyways, I really liked it. Although it annoys me to say anything about it, since ...

I like this looks like an action or mystery book. I think a little background information would have been helpful in telling you how well it fits the topic, but ...

Lilli: 4 Lilli wants to do archery! Yay! p.s. And MasterLHearts, I'm like 11! :D

Unfortunately, they still didn't have wings so when they tried to get back up to heaven, they fell back down to hell.

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uh...don't we have to actually have the tournament before we do homecoming?

Lilli-at the Pavilion Emi needed some alone time, I could tell, so I didn't follow her. Now it was just me and Lesley, so we got our food, shoved some ...

Lilli-Apollo cabin "Wanna go to my cabin to play some cards, Emi?" I asked. I absolutely love card games, so we play them all the time. She sounded reluctant, but ...