Sandvich

Bah, I need to get a hang on my dialogue rules. :P Thanks for the review!

You'd make a brilliant English teacher. :')

Yes I am indeed British, and a sir. Thanks! :)

Thanks for the review! I actually completely forgot about the rating for this chapter. xD Also, the howl that scared him was a Twisted, perhaps I should make that a ...

Absolute rubbish! I kid, it's quite good. I explained all the problems to you at school. Your style fits with the scenes quite well, and you write half decent action ...

Lol, I don't know why I chose that title either. It just seemed abstract and that. It also fitted with the previous structure of it where it was just about ...

Yes, you were thinking along the right lines. :) I didn't describe the character because I thought it would be best for the reader to imagine themselves in the situation ...

I've seen Rango. It's such an awesome film. Come to think of it it was probably one of the things that popped into my head briefly while I was writing ...

Heh, thanks. No, I haven't ever been stranded in a desert before. I've never even been in a desert before. xD

EXCELLENT edit. You fixed all the problems. As far as I can see, apart from a few places where I personally think there should be commas, it's basically perfect. Nicely ...

Left 4 Dead is some serious awesome stuff. ;) Well anyway, I'm Moo, and I couldn't resist reviewing this once I saw the title. :P I hope I manage to ...

Very nice start to a story. I haven't played Left 4 Dead personally, but I'm familiar with the zombie apocalypse premise. You've done a good job with it. Now, for ...

Hey Sandvich! Okay, so being you're new here, you probably don't realize this but, when posting another chapter, you can just make another post on Read/Write. With a novel, you ...