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Re: My Friend in the Mirror
Wow this was really cool! I liked how you made her sound really troubled and things like that. Although I do believe that her not LR she left him should ...
Dec 6, 2013 -
Re: Salvations
It sounds like a song, very smooth and easy going it really helps you follow along. I love the way it is worded making it sound like you took a ...
Nov 15, 2013 -
Re: Honeymoon in Mars - Episode2(The Road to Articus)
Instead of putting parentheses explaining what something is; describe it using Jason and Edwards thoughts or speeches. Use quotations when they are speaking and don't make them sound so stiff! ...
Nov 14, 2013 -
Re: white lilies shouldn't be so cruel
I love this poem! I am new on here and this is the first thing I have read and I'm glad I have! The last few lines where it says ...
Nov 14, 2013