Sanareth

The dirty, dusty windows of Brine street (maybe capitalize "street"?) were so thick with grime that passers-by could hardly tell weather (whether) the inside lights of buildings were on or ...

:D You're very welcome.

I like doing in-line critique, so that's what I'll do. :) There were too many choices. One was right in front of his face and the other was burning inside ...

Okay, thanks guys! The rules seem reasonable, chat speak is annoying. I'm not sure what my genre is. It tends to vary a lot. As for books I like, I ...

Anyone else read these? There's four books in the sequence, but any description of the later books will spoil the end of the one before it, I'm afraid. Basically, the ...

Im on the third chapter of New Moon, really like them so far. :) I constantly have to feel sorry for Bella, though.

Another good site for finding names is I use it a lot.

Yeah, another new guy. Sorry. :) I was looking for a website to get some critque for the short stories and things I'm writing. Most of the sites I find ...