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  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Sparrowhawk Soar

    Hi Maddy. :) My review lies below. Enjoy! The setting taking place was disastrously chaotic. First problem of the day- "disastrous" and "chaotic" mean very similar things, so the term ...

    Jan 13, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Feelings on Atheism

    I am a Christian, and a strong one at that. But as far as respect for atheists goes, I have plenty. I'd say I was equally likely to stand up ...

    Jan 7, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Are you afraid that you'll lose it?

    I'd say it was baseless, but I can empathize with how worrying it must feel! Inspiration tends to have a mind of it's own. It strikes whenever it feels like, ...

    Jan 7, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Losing Love

    Thank you for your honesty, El Finito. Your comments will be taken into account.

    Dec 30, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: What are you listening to right now?

    "SOS (Let the Music Play)" by Jordin Sparks. And to think I used to hate R'n'B!

    Dec 24, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: What book would make you attracted to a person if you...

    The Declaration by Gemma Malley, because no-one I know has read it yet and I'm desperately desperate to rant about it with someone! Reading anything by Malorie Blackman would also ...

    Dec 24, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: An Angel

    The basis for this poem is good, a very pretty concept that could go far. There are a few problems which need to be straightened out, though: Capitalisation: unfortunately, grammar ...

    Dec 24, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Losing Love

    Thank you both- I'll get to work on improving it. :)

    Dec 24, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: With You

    *sigh of satisfaction* That was gorgeous . Seriously. It warmed my heart. :) However, since I like it so much, I'm going to be more nitpicky than normal, so that ...

    Dec 23, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Wheels in Motion

    Right then! Overall, a good piece. It flowed well, emotion came through nicely, and the basis for the poem was pretty unique. A regular rhyming pattern is a good thing, ...

    Dec 23, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Losing Love

    How can I be here without him? How can a coin be cut in half? How can love vanish, and leave me here alone? Why did my body not follow ...

    Dec 23, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: I'm my worst regret.

    I really enjoyed this! The feel of the poem was very up-front and personal. The structure was a little lacking, but the lines were still cleverly crafted- the repeated "calling ...

    Dec 22, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Last Shred of Hope

    Before I nitpick- congratulations. You have produced a fantastic piece I thoroughly enjoyed reading. A wonderful prose beautifully structured- I loved it. Very much. Now, on to nitpicking. :D As ...

    Dec 22, 2009
  • Other Re: What once was my Nepenthe

    My review lies below. Enjoy! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ We all have worlds we create. These are the places we visit to escape what’s r

    Dec 22, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: What musical album has affected your writing most?

    It's difficult to choose a specific album... but I think Queen and Amy MacDonald have had the biggest say (as it were) on my various pieces. They're both very different, ...

    Dec 22, 2009


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