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Hmmm.. Thanks..According to ur smil-o-meter... Im on a good position..:)

Thank You.. :)

Hmm...Good one...:)

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Well, I really like your piece... It's Extraordinary... The ending... I JUST LOVED IT!... I will never forget my time in the Dominican, and I definitely plan on giving more ...

How lucky would you feel if you had a girl Who saw your beauty when it wasn't there Who laughed on your jokes when others wouldn't have cared Who used ...

Hmm... It's a good topic BUT The problem with it is that I really Love rhymes... And it actually is the main key to grab a reader's attention... The topic ...

WHOOOOOOSSHHHHH!!!! What a MASTERPIECE!!!.... :O EPIC!... Just AWESOME!.... Such an Inspiring way of writing poetry.... Well it really DID inspire me ALOT!... INNOVATIVE it is... This Surely is a WOW!

Well, this piece of work is good keeping in consideration that you are a junior writer the way I am... Just focus on the rhyming part of the poem because ...

Well,It's my first time on young writer's society... And actually I'm a young writer... Thank you to both of you for letting me know about my mistakes... I'll work over ...

I agree with amygabbs.. Coz emmm the line's rhythms.... You gotta work over them but overall it was good... Nice work.. Keep up the good work and u'll go further... ...

hahha... OMG That's My work.. Thanks penci for posting it... :)

Nice...

Broken in a way... That I die everyday... Each breath faints as the clock ticks away… Memories become alive and torture me at night... That’s when I miss you most ...