Samus

Wow, this is an extremely good first chapter. Your character, Ellie, has the potential to stand next to Katniss and Tris in the world of strong female characters. You had ...

Honestly, as soon as I started reading I thought, oh great another story about high school. However, this was actually good. You probably hate me right now for starting that ...

I'm not a hater, however I feel your story could use a lot more development. I understand that this is a first chapter and that the story will develop the ...